So glad you're jumping right in with writing a challenge, Nightwalker. They're a lot of fun to write. I'd be happy to beta-read a challenge, too. I don't have much time for a story, but challenges are under 3,000 words so they don't take as much time. By the way, I usually have my challenges beta-read before posting, too.
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