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PostSubject: July 23 Guilty Conscience   July 23 Guilty Conscience Icon_minitimeSat Jul 01, 2023 1:38 am

Hello folks

On time for once.
Was the bed on fire??

Anyhow - your challenge for the flexible typing fingers this month is one that has been on the list for absolutely ages...


GUILTY CONSCIENCE Embarassed Embarassed Embarassed


Not too hard at all, is it. Big smile

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PostSubject: After the Miracle?   July 23 Guilty Conscience Icon_minitimeSun Jul 02, 2023 3:15 pm

Standing in the walled courtyard that he'd spent much of the last week staring out at through a barred window, with rough hemp biting into his hands, which were tied tightly behind him as his heart thudded hard in his ears, the Kid was left contemplating the unfairness of fate. He was even wondering if they should have just stuck to the outlaw life, because in the almost eighteen months that they'd spent going straight they'd found nothing but trouble, and now he was facing something even worse than the twenty years in prison they'd been trying to avoid by going for amnesty. Because despite trying his damnedest, Heyes hadn't been able to find the miracle they'd needed to get him out of this.

The Kid squinted over at the assembled line of armed men, each holding a gun, that would very soon be pointed straight at him, and thought that perhaps refusing a blindfold hadn't really been that wise a choice after all.

The Kid in an attempt to keep the fear that was racing through him show on his face, allowed his mind to drift to his friend, who would be pacing and cursing in the Alcalde's Office. He was being kept there by the watchful immovable presence of three armed men, with his view of what was going on out here blocked by the heavy curtain that the Alcalde had ordered to be drawn across the window as the Kid had been led out.

The memory of Heyes practically begging to be allowed to watch the execution, with his panicked pleading tone holding more pain than Kid could remember hearing in his partner's voice in many years was embedded in his brain. The last time he had heard so much agony in his voice had been back when they were still children. His distress had convinced the Kid to say yes, despite his deep reservations. But of course the decision had turned out not to be his to make, and the Alcalde had been implacable in his refusal to allow it, leaving the Kid feeling reluctant gratitude towards his executioner.  Heyes would be living with enough of a guilty conscience without the addition of the horrific memory of having had to watch helplessly as his partner died shot to pieces in front of him.

They'd talked about what to do after in hushed tones once they'd realised the miracle wasn't going to happen and had decided that Heyes would let him to be buried here in Santa Marta under the name Thaddeus Jones. The Kid didn't want to be remembered as a murderer, and he firmly believed that there was absolutely no need for his partner to be subjected to the horror of transporting his body anywhere else. He'd been firm in getting Heyes to listen to him, because even though he wouldn't know, it had felt important for him to hear his friend say yes. And Heyes so despairing of his own failure to stop today happening, had for once easily agreed to anything the Kid asked.

As dawn had broken they'd been given a last few precious minutes together under the watchful eyes of armed soldiers. The Kid had stared at his partner's stricken expression, the grief he could see already settling on his face threatening to rip away his fragile composure. Heyes' eyes had been glittering with tears, and the lines on his face were stood out in sharp relief adding years to him, as he'd mouthed. “I'm sorry.” The Kid suddenly needing to offer some final comfort, had despite his own desperation, and not trusting his voice tried to smile, knowing that was all he had left to give his friend to attempt to reassure him that he didn't believe he was to blame for any of this. But his pained grimace had done nothing to ease his friend's guilt, despite his sincerity.  And before he could try again, they'd been out of time, and a heavy door had slammed shut between them as the Kid was led back to his cell to wait for the firing squad to be assembled.

He pushed the painful memory away as his attention was drawn back to the row of men in front of him by the sound of movement. The man in charge of the firing squad, who the Kid recognised as an army captain nodded sharply and straightened up, his face hardening. The Kid realised he must have missed some kind of signal from the Alcalde because after a deep breath the Captain shouted what was obviously an order, and even with the Kid's limited Spanish, he understood its meaning.“Apunter.”

As several rifles were suddenly aimed straight at his chest, the Kid determined not to show any emotion forced his mind into the calm that he always found when facing a gun and waited to die. But to his shock rather than feeling a hail of bullets ripping into him, he instead heard a disturbance behind him, and he swirled round almost eagerly, as hope that Heyes had finally pulled off the impossible flooded through him. But the brief flare of optimism was quickly replaced by puzzled despair, when he came face to face with two men he'd believed he'd never see again, except perhaps in nightmares.

He couldn't understand what they were doing here, had he somehow missed being killed? Both of these men were dead by his gun. The last time he'd seen Hector Martin, was ten years ago, as he'd breathed out his last, outside a bank in Abilene, the weapon he had been aiming at the Kid's back on the ground beside him. The second man had lost his life less than two years ago, sprawled on the dusty street of Matherville, his face frozen in a parody of the grin he'd so often sported in life.

The Alcalde stepped over to greet the two villains with a welcoming smile. “Ahh it is good to see you, I was afraid my message would not reach you in time.”

The Kid stared in shock at what was happening, because he had until just now believed the Alcalde to be a decent man , albeit one blinded by his desire to find an easy way of solving an inconvenient murder, but before he could react any further, one of the men gave an irritatingly familiar grin. “We wouldn't have missed this for the world would we Hector?” The other man shook his head with a gleeful look over at the Kid as Bilson continued to talk. ”It's good to be somewhere cool. Lord Lucifer was more than happy to give us a few days to escort another soul into his tender arms.” He laughed, the unpleasant mocking sound brought the hair on the Kid's neck up and his stomach roiled in a mix of anger and fear. Bilson then twisted so he was facing the Kid, his smile even less pleasant than the Kid remembered as he said with amusement clear in his tone.“ Hector was disappointed that I won the toss and was given the live rounds.” He turned his gaze back to the Alcalde, as his smile grew even wider. “But with a little discussion, we decided to share the pleasure.” He turned back to grin at the Kid as he said. “I sure am glad you won't be firing back at us Thaddeus. It's going to be as easy as shooting plates, but far more satisfying.”

The Kid having heard enough, anger replacing some of his fear and confusion, started towards the men, but found himself restrained by the guards behind him. “No, Senor Jones, stay where you are.”

The Alcalde turned to his men who were looking more than a little puzzled, their rifles still half pointing towards the Kid and waved at them. “Estas  despedido.”  

As the Kid watched, his heart in his mouth, the assembled men in front of him seemed to sag in relief. It seemed that being part of a firing squad was not something they enjoyed, and with their Captain leading the way they quickly departed,not glancing over at the Kid as they passed, probably not wanting to acknowledge the condemned man for fear of nightmares.

The Kid sweating, his breath coming in short sharp gasps, didn't understand any of this, the strange fogginess in his mind, and the odd blurriness of what he was seeing wasn't helping his confusion any either.

He knew at this point that Heyes must be wondering what the hell was happening. The Kid looked over at the heavy gate at the far end of the courtyard, almost expecting to see his irate friend come barrelling through it, demanding to know what was going on.

But his attention was quickly drawn back to his own predicament as he was manoeuvred back into position. Without thinking he pushed back, irritated by rough handling, when he was hardly in a position to fight, but all he got for his trouble was a  hard kick on his shin, a sharp prod in his back from a rifle, and an impatient. “Be still Senor, there is no escape.”

He almost rolled his eyes at the man, as if he hadn't realised that for himself. Straightening his back despite his fear and the growing nausea, the Kid stared over at the Alcalde saying firmly. “You know I didn't kill Ralph Hanley.”

The Alcalde met his gaze steadily. “I know nothing of the sort Senor Jones.” The Kid knew he was lying, and anger replaced some of the thudding fear. Deciding he wouldn't waste any more of his final breaths on the idiot, he simply threw him a final glare, shook his head angrily, and turned to face the men who would take his life. How someone claiming to be a decent man and an upholder of the law could watch him die, knowing he was innocent of the crime he was accused of he honestly didn't know.  But as he stared ahead, out across the courtyard, the Kid was suddenly impatient. Now that he saw no way out of this, there simply being nowhere left for him to run, he wanted to get this over with. He hoped fervently that he would have the chance to settle the score with the two men aiming guns at him , when they were all on the other side. No more thought was possible as the Alcalde shouted in English standing a safe distance from the guns. “Aim, then fire when ready.”


Before the Kid could be torn apart by an oncoming wave of  bullets, he was being shaken and an urgent voice was loud in his ear. He came awake with a start, surprised to find himself in what was obviously a hotel bedroom looking up at the very worried face of his partner as his heart pounded in his ears and his head span. “What the hell Kid?”

Struggling to catch his breath, he could only shake his head aware of being drenched in sweat as his hands trembled slightly. He tried to look away from Heyes, embarrassed at what his face must be showing, but Heyes held his head tightly and too shaken from what he'd dreamt to fight too hard, the Kid stopped moving and simply closed his eyes as the potent imagery and feeling brought on by the dream lingered, before reopening them to rest his gaze on Heyes and say softly. “They were going to kill me, Heyes, the alcalde was going to let Danny and Hector kill me.”

He swallowed hard and flinched as his mind finished the dream and he felt the impact of the bullets ripping into him.

“Great time to develop an imagination Kid.” Though the words seemed harsh, Heyes' tone was soft and reassuring, as still keeping their eyes locked, he released his grip on the Kid's head and began to gently stroke his arms, murmuring nothing words, as if settling a spooked horse, the touch and tone grounded the Kid, allowing reality to force  the dream to begin to loosen its grip on him, though he was still breathing far heavier than usual and his heart seemed loud in his ears.

As he came back to himself, Heyes pulled back, but kept his hand on the Kid's arm, allowing him some space but still offering support as he said. “And before you ask, I'm back early, 'cos I didn't want to clean 'em out and cause a scene.”

The Kid took another steadying breath as he remembered that Heyes had gone to play cards, after filling him about what had happened and ruining his hat. He let the memory of their conversation drift into his mind, hoping that something so normal would dispel more of the dream as he swung his legs over the side of the bed and stood a little unsteadily, desperate for a drink of water to ease his dry scratchy throat.

“You ever gonna get outta that bath, Kid? I swear you're gonna scrub yourself invisible or just plain melt away if you stay in there much longer.”

The Kid had startled at the sound of his friend's voice, before frowning and shrugging, shivering sightly as he was hit by the fact that the water had gone cold.

He'd clambered out of the bath carefully, fumbling and barely catching the towel that Heyes had thrown at him. As he dried himself, he'd had to be careful not to trip himself up. He'd spent too much time in and out of jail in the past few days to fully relax, and the last two days of waiting for the miracle that Heyes had finally pulled off, had all added up to an almost total lack of sleep in the last week, other than a few restless hours. He'd looked up owlishly from drying his feet and shaken his head wearily, when his partner had asked if he was hungry. “More tired than anythin' else Heyes. Just gonna go to bed and sleep till breakfast, or maybe even lunch.”

A brief look of concern had crossed his friend's face before it'd faded, replaced by a small smile. “Sure, Kid, guess you ain't been sleeping good. But I'm in the mood to celebrate.” He'd paused and added with a dimpled grin. “So don't be worrying, and don't try to wait up.”

The Kid had again shook his head, as he'd snapped. “Ain't intending on doing either.”  He'd been left feeling vaguely irritated and a little disappointed that Heyes wasn't staying in with him but pushing that away, he'd slid under the quilt, wearing only clean long john pants muttering. “Just don't lose all our money this time.”


Which of course explained his partner's comment as he'd woken. He poured himself a glass of liquid from the jug by the door, grateful that it was still cold, and finished it in one gulp, before walking over to stare down at the still busy street, feeling Heyes watching him, grateful that he wasn't pushing for answers. The memory of the dream was still far too clear in his head, and he blew out a heavy breath, willing his mind to quiet with little success. He rarely dreamt, usually only doing so when he was incredibly overtired or very stressed, but when he did, they were generally just like this one, painfully vivid nightmares, that were often hard to shake. And damn he was still too tired to be able to properly make the effort that was needed to banish the shadows from his mind. Tomorrow would be better.

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The happiest conversation is that of which nothing is distinctly remembered but a general effect of pleasing impression.
Samuel Johnson

Imagination will often carry us to worlds that never were. But without it we go nowhere.
Carl Sagan


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PostSubject: Re: July 23 Guilty Conscience   July 23 Guilty Conscience Icon_minitimeTue Jul 04, 2023 7:26 pm

8.23023 Challenge – Guilty Conscience

Wednesday

“Will the defendants please rise.”

The spectators in the small packed court room leaned forward and the excited chatter rose to a crescendo in anticipation of the verdict and sentencing. The dark-haired defendant slowly rose from his chair before turning to assist their reluctant lawyer to help the struggling blonde to his feet. The presiding judge banged the gavel several times to restore order.

“Order in the court!” The deputy acting as bailiff shouted. The crowd quieted.

“A jury of your peers have rendered a verdict.”

“Not my peers, more like an angry mob,” muttered the older defendant under his breath.

“Hannibal Heyes, you have been found guilty of armed robbery of the Mercantile Bank of Lonetree and accessory to the murder of Josephine Baum and her unborn child. You are sentenced to life in prison. You will never again be a menace to society.”

Heyes stood stone-faced, dark brown eyes simmering with rage the only indication of his reaction to the verdict. He took a step to his right and stood shoulder to shoulder to his partner, needing and giving physical and emotional support through the close contact.

The judge’s harsh stare now turned to the man stiffly balancing most of his weight on the left leg. Heyes felt the tensing of Kid’s shoulders as Curry subtly shifted into his gunfighter stance in anticipation of what he would hear. All signs of distress were erased in the space of a heartbeat.

“Jedidiah Curry, you have been found guilty of armed robbery of the Mercantile Bank of Lonetree and the murder of Josephine Baum and her unborn child. I sentence you to hang by the neck until dead. May the Lord have mercy on your soul. The execution will take place in three days on Saturday at noon.”

~~~~~~~~~~~ASJ~~~~~~~~~~~

Friday Night

“Francis, come to bed. It’s three in the morning.” Abigail Warren stood in the doorway, peering into the dimly lit private study in the governor’s mansion.

Abigail tightened the tie of her silk dressing gown and entered the room to stand in front of her husband. She noticed the rumpled black trousers and unbuttoned white shirt, the shoes had been removed and lay haphazard under the chair. The woman nodded to the hand holding a half empty brandy snifter, the opened bottle within reaching distance on the elegant side table. “So, you thought you would drown your guilty conscious instead. The brandy won’t help, you know.” She reached out and gently pried the glass from Francis’ hand.

“My conscience has nothing to be guilty about. Hannibal Heyes and Kid Curry have robbed banks and trains, plenty of them. Kid Curry didn’t get the reputation of the Fastest Gun in the West without killing a man or two and maybe more. Besides, there was an eye witness identification in Lonetree.”

“But they didn’t rob the bank in Lonetree and Kid Curry didn’t shoot an innocent woman with child and you know it. What’s more, eyewitness identifications are unreliable. Francis Warren, they wouldn’t have been anywhere near Lonetree if you hadn’t sent them on that job, which they were forced to do and completed it on time. You said yourself that it would have been impossible for them to even be in Lonetree at the time of the robbery. We may not know who committed those horrible crimes but it wasn’t Heyes and Curry.”

“What do you want me to do, Abby?” Francis raised a hand to his forehead and pressed hard against the pounding headache that had been building all night. He looked up, his eyes pleading for a way out of the messy situation.

Abby settled herself in the matching chair. Her face and tone were serious but empathetic. “You know what I think you should do. You used to listen to my advice and valued it. What changed?”

Her husband dropped his eyes to his lap. “Nothing changed. I still value your opinion. I’ve never treated you as woman incapable of understanding all aspects of our life. But Charles has been a loyal campaign manager, one of best in politics. Henry is astute and efficient as my chief of staff. They do know how to strategize and read the public.”

Abby leaned forward. Her intense gaze found her husband’s eyes and bored into him. “They’re wrong this time. I agree with their assessment of your options but they are reading the big donors and giving you political expedient advice. They don’t have the fate of those two young men in their hands. They don’t have to live with themselves if this travesty of so-called justice is allowed to proceed. You do.”

“I know. But if I do anything to stop or change the findings of the Lonetree court then I’ll have to explain how I know they’re innocent of the charges and that will open a can of worms I’m not ready to open yet. Perhaps in year or so after the election but not now. I tried having a telegram for a stay of execution to postpone the hanging sent earlier to give myself time to decide wisely. But the line out that way went down earlier in the day and won’t be repaired in time. It’s too late.”

“We don’t know why Heyes and Curry decided to renounce their criminal way of life. I suspect there were several reasons, some selfish and some truly repentant. It doesn’t matter, what does matter, Francis, is that they did. They turned their lives around and lived by honest means for a few years now. You’re the third governor who has strung them along and they haven’t given up. That shows commitment and true change. What does your conscience tell you is the right thing to do? You have to decide now when there still may be time to act or in the dark of night when you least expect it your guilt will haunt your dreams.”

Francis Warren sat staring straight ahead. He shook himself and straightened up in his chair. He rose to head over to the door, squeezing his wife’s hand briefly in thankfulness. “I’m going to find someone to go wake Sheriff Trevors up and have him and a couple of marshals meet us here as soon they can. Please stay Abby and help me draft my messages. Charlie and Henry will have to deal with the fallout.” He looked over his shoulder and winked. “You may want to put some suitable clothes on, though first.”

~~~~~~~~~~ASJ~~~~~~~~~~~

Saturday

“Curry, it’s time. Stand up and put your face against the back wall.” The sheriff flanked by two deputies ordered with undisguised glee.

Kid painfully swung his legs down to the floor. He scooted down to the end of the narrow cot and his right hand reached up to grab hold of the bars. Kid Curry pulled himself to his feet and balanced on his left leg. He stuck his right hand through the bars for the ritual parting handshake. His partner gripped the sweaty, fevered hand hard as if hanging on could forestall the inevitable. Blue eyes met brown for the last time and held for a long moment. Kid forcibly pulled his hand out from Hannibal Heyes’ grasp, pivoted and faced the rear wall of the jail cell.

The deputies pointed their guns at the middle of Kid Curry’s back. The sheriff unlocked the cell, entered and reached for the Kid’s arms, roughly yanking them back and binding the wrists tightly with strong rope.

“Come on, lets go. We can’t keep everyone waitin’.” The lawman glanced in the next cell. “Too bad Heyes, ya ain’t gonna see the hangin’. It’s gonna be quite a show. I want him to slowly strangle, suffer and know it. We’re short ropin’ him so he dances for a good long while for all the people to see. No way the drop is gonna kill him. Hope they can get some good pictures for the papers, too.”

The Kid’s wound-fevered flushed complexion paled noticeably.

The sheriff continued with his malicious description of the event to come, “And we’re gonna leave him swingin’ there so if the marshals get here before he rots too badly in this heat ya can say good bye on your way to prison. Your partner’s hangin’ is the biggest event Lonetree has seen in years, maybe ever. Everyone for miles around is in town today, Reporters and photographers are here from all over that could get here in time. They staked out all the good spots around the gallows. We’re gonna be famous as the place where Kid Curry met his end and Hannibal Heyes was caught for good.” The three lawmen escorted the bound prisoner to the door of the jail where two deputized townsmen that were guarding the jail door joined them for the walk to the gallows.

Heyes vibrated with barely controlled rage and frustration as he watched his injured best friend, partner, and only living family member limping badly surrounded by gloating lawmen. He had been holding out hope that the telegram the partners had sent to Trevors brought results but it was not to be. Time slowed and the last glimpse of the Kid was a vision where the torn, dirty and bloodstained clothes, bruised and swollen features, a stiff carriage from battered ribs, and the pronounced limp from a gunshot right thigh faded into the boyishly handsome features of the kind-hearted, chivalrous man who moved with athletic grace that Heyes preferred to remember him being.

The pent-up tension of their undeserved fate and their inability to change the situation became almost unbearable. The agitated frenzied pacing from the interminable previous night returned. Heyes swept his sensitive talented fingers across his face, trying to compose himself.

The partners had spent the entirety of the night sitting next to each other on their respective cots with only cold iron bars separating them. The conversation was for their ears only and ranged over the span of their lives together. For the Kid’s sake Heyes used all his legendary self-control to rein in his spiraling anger and desperation. Kid, for his part, focused his energies less on his own despair and did his best to console his cousin, who would have to face the ordeal of prison alone. Kid firmly believed that his relatively quick end was preferrable, to him, at least, over the slow death of a life lived in prison. Heyes wasn’t so sure during the dark night but was rethinking the different fates in the light of day.

When the gray light of dawn filtered through the jail windows all that could be spoken, all that needed to be shared between the lifelong friends, closer than brothers, had been said. Both men’s voices were strained from the physical act of whispering throughout the night and the gamut of emotions that coursed through the partners. Heyes laid on his back and stared at the ceiling, his mind racing with wild thoughts and plans that could never come to fruition. Kid leaned back against the stone wall of the jail cell. He consciously shut down his emotions, fear, anger, and regret chief among them. He deliberately withdrew further into himself, closing doors within his mind. Stillness enveloped the infamous gunman. The only stimulus that he acknowledged silently was pain. Pain signaled continued life.

A few minutes until noon, when the reality was hitting Heyes full bore, his heart started to race and he felt close to passing out. The smooth-talking ex-outlaw, who wasn’t able to get anyone to listen dropped heavily to the cot, burying his face in his hands. The smell of the jail heightened to cause nausea, and the muted sounds of the assembled crowd sharpened and seemed to drill into his ears.

Heyes couldn’t tell you how long he sat, elbows on knees, head in his hands, trying to block out all thoughts and senses. The sudden loud roar of the crowd permeated the enveloping shell of the ex-outlaw. A sharp pain in his gut caused him to double over. Reaching under the cot for the chamber pot, Hannibal Heyes squeezed his eyes shut tight as he vomited.

~~~~~~~~~~~ASJ~~~~~~~~~~~~

There was a carnival atmosphere in the packed small-town square. Strangers and locals stood shoulder to shoulder, all clamoring for a good view of the infamous gunman’s demise. Some were there for vengeance; most were merely curious. The crowd parted to let the condemned and his guards walk slowly to the hastily built gallows. Armed deputized men were liberally stationed around the town, keeping a watchful eye so that the hanging would proceed as planned.

A row of chairs had been placed in front of the gallows. The mayor and his extended family were front and off to the right as the victim was their daughter who was married to the sheriff’s son whose entire family were also there. To the left sat the rest of the town council and select guests.

Kid tried to keep his eyes straight ahead, ignoring the cheers and jeers of the assembled onlookers. A near overwhelming wave of chagrin at the idea that his death was entertainment to the vast majority caused his posture to draw in protectively. He quickly got himself under control to stand straight and tall as best he could. Blue eyes squinted in the bright noon sun and narrowed even further when Curry spotted the numerous reporters with the pads and pencils interspersed with photographers stationed directly in line of the noose both at ground level and in the back of a strategically placed wagon. Kid Curry’s blood turned to ice at the thought that although he undoubtably committed crimes and earned his title of the Fastest Gun in the West the hard way, he would be forever remembered for the heinous crime of murdering a woman and her unborn child. An act that was so antithetical to his fundamental personality and beliefs and that he could not accept.

They reached the gallows, where Curry stopped, balancing on his left leg and studied the flight up. The sheriff gave him a hard prod in the back. The prisoner’s right leg buckled and without the use of his arms he fell flat on his face against the steps. Kid felt warmth start to trickle down the side of his face from a reopened cut above his left eye and tasted the metallic tang of blood from a newly split lip. Kid managed to twist onto his side.

“If you want me up there, someone’s gonna have to get me there. You put a bullet in my right thigh. It won’t support my full weight.”

The sheriff scowled in annoyance. He gestured to his two regular deputies. “Go ahead and drag the piece of scum up there.”

The lawmen managed to position the prisoner centered on the trap door. A reverend joined them on the elevated platform of the gallows. They greeted and waved to the crowd. The sheriff indicated that the photographers could take their first round of pictures as the lawmen posed around the infamous outlaw.

“Have any last words?”

“No. You people haven’t listened to a word my partner or me have said. You won’t listen now. Anything that I needed to say, I’ve already said to only person that matters. The rest will keep until I meet my maker.”

The sheriff bent down and picked up a black hood that was previously placed on the platform. He came around to the front of the Kid and lifted the hood.

Curry jerked his head back and the sheriff missed placing in over the Kid’s head. “No hood. I want my last sight to be the blue of the sky.”

“I don’t care what ya want, Curry. My daughter-in-law can’t see the blue sky from under six feet of dirt where you put her,” growled the sheriff.

“For the last time, I didn’t shoot her. I don’t know who did but they’re still out there and they’re likely to kill some other person’s loved one in the future.”

“Shut up.” The sheriff turned hangman shot back venomously.

“Look, a condemned man is allowed one last wish, right? That’s my last wish, no hood.”

“It’s no sense lettin’ ya look up. Ya ain’t goin’ up there. Ya going down, a lot more than six feet down. Yer bein’ sent straight to hell. You’s devil’s spawn.” The deputies stepped up to keep the condemned man in place while the sheriff jammed the heavy black muslin hood over his head. The lawman then placed the hanging noose over the hooded head and roughly pulled it high and tight around the neck and under the prisoner’s jaw, the knot hard by the left ear.

The reverend opened his bible. He looked up and smiled for the cameras as the second round of pictures were taken. The cleric then proceeded to read a passage and prayed for the damned soul.

Curry took a deep slow breath. The smell of past condemned men’s fear and bodily fluids filled his nostrils and left a bitter taste in his mouth. Kid forced the rising bile back down. He ignored the drone of the reverend’s insincere and meaningless prayers. Prayers never helped in the past, they weren’t going to make a difference now.

Kid tuned out awareness of any external surroundings. All his concentration was on the sound of his fast-beating heart that somehow morphed into the pounding of horses’ hooves. The still young man shut his eyes, relaxed his muscles and envisioned a bright blue sky. A fluffy white cloud appeared with golden rays of sunshine filtering though. A majestic eagle flew out from behind the cloud soaring ever higher into the brilliant blue. It might have been a cliché but in it his mind found comfort. He dropped, the vision tunneled and slowly faded into darkness.

TBC

This was not intended to be in two parts but I reached the word limit so I'll just leave the story hanging here (groan).
I hope the reader noted that there isn't any kind of warning attached to the story.

PS - I see Racheal 741 beat me to a story post. The prompt must lead the mind in morbid directions. It wasn't my intention to be so like Racheal's, please excuse any similarities. I hadn't read it until I went to post this story.

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PostSubject: Guilty Conscience   July 23 Guilty Conscience Icon_minitimeWed Jul 05, 2023 9:38 am

Nell: I am hoping that Abagail got through to her husband in time to get a message to stop the hanging. It is bad enough that you are hanging an innocent man, but to heap your own hate on him on top of that is sickening. It feels like there is no hope for them. I can see them talking through the night, separated by the bars, trying too offer comfort to each other. We don't need to know what was said, but you can feel the love. Kid is most likely right, it will be harder on Heyes serving life in prison and doing it without him.


Rachel741: Yes, this is an intense one also. Being executed for something you didn't do and people not caring at all. Throwing Danny into the mix just makes it worse, so glad it was only a dream, but they can very real and disturbing.

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PostSubject: Re: July 23 Guilty Conscience   July 23 Guilty Conscience Icon_minitimeFri Jul 28, 2023 3:57 pm

Guilty Conscious

These are two scenes I’m adding to my Rose story because, of course, Kid Curry would have a guilty conscious for not watching his partner’s back…


That evening Rose came home earlier from work.  “Goodness, is it raining!” she exclaimed as she took off her wet jacket and shoes.  “It’s a slow night because of the weather so I came home.”  She looked over at the two partners.  “How’s Joshua doing?  Any better?”

Kid Curry smiled.  “His fever is down a little.  I don’t know what concoction Harriet made to give him but that, along with keepin’ him wet, is workin'.  She’s comin’ back tomorrow to check and clean the wounds.

“Joshua is lucky to have you.”

“I don’t know about that.  I wasn’t downstairs watchin’ his back.  This wouldn’t have happened if I wasn’t with you.”

“But you asked and Joshua said it was okay.  Our poker games are usually quiet and don’t end up like this.”

The Kid shook his head.  “I should have been with him.”

“You shouldn’t beat yourself up over this, Thaddeus.  I’m not certain it’d make a difference being it was Smiley.”  Rose walked over to the stove.

“I shouldn’t have left him,” Curry mumbled to himself.

“Oh, good, you have coffee made.  Want some more?”  Rose poured herself a cup and held up the pot.

Curry held out his cup.  “Sure.”


~ * ~ * ~ * ~

Heyes woke up in the afternoon and watched his partner tying his gun down.  “Where’re you going?”

Kid Curry quickly turned toward him.  “You’re awake.  Let me get you some water and a biscuit to eat.”

“Didn’t answer my question.  Where’re you going?”

The Kid handed the food and glass to Heyes.  “Out.”

“Out where?”

Curry sighed.  “If I was downstairs and not with Rose, this wouldn’t have happened to you.”

“You don’t know that, Kid.”  Heyes took a sip of water.  “So, you’re going out to find Smiley.”

Kid Curry nodded.

“And then what?”

“He tried to kill you!”

“And then what, Kid?  You’re not a killer.”

“You could’ve died!”

“What about amnesty?  Don’t you do something foolish to jeopardize it.”

“I’m tired of folks takin’ advantage of us now.  Smiley has to know he can’t get away doin’ what he did.”  Curry opened the door.  “Rest, Heyes.  Hopefully I’ll be back before Rose does around midnight.”

“Kid!” Heyes shouted in frustration as his partner left and the door closed.  He put his good hand to his head and pressed down hard to stop the throbbing.

~ * ~ * ~ * ~

Kid Curry stayed in the back alleyways of Jackson, careful not to be spotted, looking for Roy Smiley.  He unholstered and added a sixth bullet to the chamber when he saw the person he was looking for coming out of an outhouse.  He stood his gunfighter stance.  “Roy Smiley!” he called out.

Smiley quickly looked and was about to take out his gun.

“I don’t think so.”  Curry walked towards him with his gun aimed at him.  “We need to talk.”

“Talk, Kid Curry?” Smiley asked.  “Or are you gonna shoot me?”

“You shot my partner.”

Roy Smiley grinned.  “The great Hannibal Heyes!  Did he die?  I’ve been lookin’ for the two of you.”  He threw down his weapon.  “Gonna shoot an unarmed man?”

The Kid heard Heyes’ voice in his head talking about amnesty.  Was Roy Smiley worth losing amnesty?  He holstered his gun and walked up to the man.  He sucker punched him in the jaw.  “Leave…”  He hit him in the stomach, Roy doubled over.  “My…”  He kneed him in the lower regions.  “Partner…”  

Roy Smiley fell to the ground, clutching his privates, and moaning.

Curry kicked him in the ribs.  “Alone!”  He looked around before grabbing Smiley’s arm and lifting him into a standing position.  “Get outta here and if you ever see me or Heyes, turn around and leave.  You understand?”

Smiley barely nodded.

“I didn’t hear you.”

“Yeah.”  Smiley spat out some blood.  “I hear ya.”

A saddled horse was nearby.

“Is that yours?” Curry asked.

Roy nodded.

Kid Curry ‘helped’ him into the saddle.  “Now git!”

The rider spurred his horse away from his tormentor and town.

The Kid rubbed his sore knuckles as he made his way back to the cabin.  “That hurts.”  When he got to the door, he tapped once and then twice.  He slowly opened the door.  “It’s just me.”

Heyes put down his gun.  “You didn’t do nothing stupid, did you?”

Kid Curry shook his head.  “I just convinced Roy Smiley to leave town and turn around if he ever sees us again.”

Heyes released a breath he didn’t realize he was holding.

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"Do you ever get the feeling that nothing right is ever going to happen to us again?" - Kid Curry

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PostSubject: Penski Rose additions   July 23 Guilty Conscience Icon_minitimeMon Jul 31, 2023 12:10 am

I loved the Rose character and glad you revisited her. And Curry's way of handling the situation was very visual.

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PostSubject: Guilty Conscience - Not Beta checked, I claim all errors   July 23 Guilty Conscience Icon_minitimeMon Jul 31, 2023 11:38 pm

Guilty Conscience
July 2023

It’s been hard to sleep the last three nights because for the first time, I lied to the boys.  When I called them to Porterville, I told them the governor had a favor they would like to do for him.  It would be another point in their favor toward the governor granting their amnesty.  

But I lied.  The favor was for me and the governor knows nothing about it.  It’s dangerous and I was afraid if it was for me, they wouldn’t do it.  And I wouldn’t have blamed them at all.

So now they’ve joined the Crooked Creek gang looking for my nephew, Tony Mason.  He’s only fifteen and ran away from home when my sister remarried.  His pa was a member of the gang and was killed in prison.  Tony didn’t like his stepfather and ran away.  I left out the part of my family relationships when I pitched the job.

Heyes and Curry listened carefully then Heyes asked, “And the governor is approving us joining the Crooked Creek Gang?  We been trying to stay honest and this sounds like he wants us to cross that line again.”

Again, I lied.  “Governor’s backing it fully.”

That was a week ago.  Seven days with no telegrams from the boys.

But now I got a telegram that the bank in Johnson Point was robbed by that gang.  Two arrests have been made.  Without going home to pack, I’m heading there with a guilty conscience.  I’m going over in my head what I’m going to tell the governor if one or both of them are sitting in that jail, or were identified by some good citizen during the robbery to try and keep their amnesty.  I have to tell him I lied and beg him not to cancel their chance at amnesty.  I may have ruined the lives of two of my friends.

Johnson Point was an established small town with a sheriff and a deputy.  That was my first stop.

“Hi, I’m Sheriff Trevors from Porterville, just passing through and thought I’d drop in and say hello. Heard you had some excitement around here.”

As I entered the office, I glanced to the cells and was relieved that I did not recognize either of the two men in the cells…not Heyes or Curry or Tony.  

“Hi, I’m Sheriff Abe West, glad to meet you. Is that Lom Trevors?”

“Why yes it is,” I answered wondering how he knew my name.

“Your nephew was in here earlier with his two uncles.  Said you’d be coming along shortly.  They’re waiting for you at the hotel.”

“Thank you, sir,” I said, almost running out the door.  I found them in room 201 overlooking the street. They’d watched me hurry across the street and their door was open waiting for me.

“Uncle Lom, I can explain,” Tony said before I even got into the room.  I just grabbed him in a hug.  

“I’m so glad you’re okay.”

Then I turned to the boys..

“Lom," the Kid growled and I remembered how feared this man was on the wrong side of the law.  So I told the truth.

“Didn’t think you’d do it if you knew it was just for me,” I apologized, unable to look the Kid in the eyes  “How did you figure it out?”

“Heyes don’t never forget anything.  You were a member of the gang when your sister married Anthony Mason from the Crooked Creek Gang.  And when she gave birth to a son, Anthony Mason, Jr. was when you decided to go straight. Sneaked into their hideout and kidnapped him.”

“We would have helped you if you asked us straight.  Just didn’t seem right that the governor would ASK us to join a pretty violent gang.” The Kid handed me a drink.  

“I’m sorry.”

Heyes smiled that wide smile of his as he moved the whiskey bottle out of Tony’s reach.  “That's all we wanted to hear. Sit down.  We got something to discuss.  Your nephew here has decided he wants to live with his Uncle Lom.”

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